Corrected Essay 4

I have a lot of memorial days, but I would like to talk one of the special days for me. It
was March 8 in 2005, and it is a day when I won the championship of the badminton
club for the first time. I remember the day clearly, so let me introduce my best day.

I joined a badminton club when I was a student of elementary school. The reason why I
belonged to the club is only because I was invited by my friends, not that I wanted to
play badminton. I had never played it before that time. We practiced every Wednesday,
but I lacked the motivation to play badminton. I thought I didn’t need to try practicing
and becoming better at it.

However, as time went on, I became to think I wanted to play it and be better more and
more. When I was in the sixth grade, I was told that I was good and would win the
championship. I had confidence in myself, but I couldn’t easily do as well as my wishes .
I regretted not putting my heart into practice, so I made more efforts.

The last tournament was held on March 8, and I took part in a doubles match with my
partner, Aoi. She was so good at playing badminton. We won the semifinal game
smoothly, but our rivals were powerful players. I and she lost the confidence for just a
second, but we remembered deciding to win the last championship absolutely. We
thought we were uncertain of our confidence, but never gave up and stick to the match
to the end, we could defeat our rival. We couldn’t believe we won them, being aware of
winning, and we became so happy and couldn’t stop crying tears of happiness.

I thought I was glad that I didn’t retire from the club. I will never forget this day.

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Freshman's Assigment : University and High School

I asked Arisa about university and high school. She likes her university. She lives in Kengun, so it is close to her house a little bit. It takes fifteen minutes to get there from her house. She likes the campus because it is so big. She likes the other students, because they are friendlly andkind very much. She likes the teachers and the professors a little bit. She went to Marist High School. She had a reunion in last summer and last winter. She doesn't meet her friends in high school. Her memories of her school is studying. She felt that her school is better than her university, because it was freedom. She comes to heruniversity by bike. Her high school started the class 8:45. She didn't belong to any club in high school. The uniform of her high school was like AKB48 what is called the idol of the top of Japan.
I think that high school is better than university, because it is funny. All my friends in high school are kind.

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Freshman's Assigment : Holidays and Special Days

The topic was about holidays and special days. I asked some questions to Hiroaki. His birthday is December 25. It is Christmas. He celebrates it with his friends and family. His favorite holiday is New Year's day. The reson why He feel so is that he can get a lot of money what is called "otoshidama." He usually goes shopping at New Year's day. He usually visits grandmother's house at O-bon. He usually spends a lot of times with his friends at Christmas. His image of that day in the U.S. is so fun. His most important and memorial day is his birthday. He spent that day with his friends, and his family. He likes going out better than spending in his home at Christmas. If he can get a present from Santa Claus, he wants his new car. He has ever been going to car license school, so he wanted to ride a new car. He got cakes, letters, and a watch for his birthday present last year. He felt so happy.
I went to Saisyunkan to see the illuminations withmy boyfriend. It was so beautiful. After that, we went to go to the restaurant to eat dinner. Next day, we went to Aqua Domein the Kumamoto city to play skating. We are good at plaing it. It was funny very much.

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elementary school memory

I will talk my elementary school memory. I had a lot of things, but memorial thing is club activity. I belonged to a badminton club, because I was invited by my friends. In fact, I was straying which is better badminton or basketball club, but I liked badminton better, so I decided. I was good at playing sports, but I cannot play well for the first time. I was mortifying and repeated practice repeatedly. While it was, it turned out that I became skillful little by little. Although I became the best student and my number of times of a game has also decreased, but I had never won the victory. Whenever I lost at a game, I was mortifying, and I cried. Then, the last game suited before graduation in March. I was able to win the victory in its game. I was greatly glad with the partner. That was my special memory.

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