Corrected Essay 1-02

Let me introduce my treasure. It is my pet. Her name is Hina. I call her Hina-chan. She
came to my house on May 2 last year. The reason why her name is Hina is that she was
born on March 3. This day is is called Hinamatsuri in Japan. It is held for all girls, and
she is a female dog, so my mother gave her that name.
In fact, at that time, my family members didn't want to have a pet. I thought if we have
an animal in a house, we spend a lot of money and she makes everything dirty. We
understood that well, but we also knew that a pet is cute and healing, so we wanted
some chance to get a pet for free or for someone to hand one over to us.
One day, my mother was reading a newspaper in the morning, and she was surprised!
There is an article which says someone was willing to hand over dogs for free. The
article was by an old man and his family and they live near my house, and recently,
their dog gave birth to a few dogs. But they couldn't care for them because he was old, so
they were searching for someone to take the dogs instead of them. So my mother called
him, went to his house and saw them, choose one dog, and took her back to my house.
She is a crossbred dog. Her mother was a kind of schnauzer, but it is not clear what kind
of a dog her father was. She is comfortable to touch, because she is covered with hair
and it is soft. Her hair color is black, brown, and white. Also, she has a mustache. It
looks like the mustache of an old man, and I feel it is so cute!
I’m always together with her in my free time when I’m in my house. I walk her on sunny
days. She likes going out, seeing the outside scenery, and running around. When I take
her outside, she looks very happy . When I call her name, she always comes to me. She
is so cute, and she makes us happy.

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BR 1-01 : Wizards

I choose 'Wizards' for my first book review, because I am interested in wizards. This book is consisted of three chapters. I like chapter 2. It was about one man. He is old wizard, so  he doesn't use magic anymore. He looked after children, and he was respected by them. They wanted to use magic, so learned by him. One day, a robber tried to make an invasion, but the wizard stopped him with his magic. Finally, they held a Christmas party with everyone. It looks happy.
If I can become a wizard and use a magic, I want to be the rich, and use money in my own way. I want to buy favorite things like clothes, accessories, books, fashion magazines, and so on.

Rawson, Christopher. Wizards,

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Self Introduction

Hello, Mr. tomei. Let me introduce myself. My name is Saki Kudo. I am a student of KGU and 3rd grade. I major in English, because I like English and want to study more. My favorite food is cream puff. I like sweet desert very much! Also, I like gyoza made by my mother. I am from OHZU high school. It is famous for soccer. OHZU is strong at playing soccer, so I watched the games many times. I like soccer of high school very much. I work a part-time job at Osaka Osyo. It is fun and not makes me tired so much.

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Essays : Advice to my kohai

I couldn't get a credit of 2nd Writing Ⅲ, because I didn't do my homework enough. Students had to write 10000 words and do 15 book reviews. I wrote about 8000 words, so it was lack of a number of words of my blog.  Also, I did just 12 book review.
I had taken the Paul's class. He is kind, and good to teach us English. I could learn a lot of things about writing essays. He taught us English grammar, spell, and pronunciation.
I wrote a lot of essays. The topics were about 'dear host family,' learning with computers, how I think about languages, my work place, and so on.
I have a computer in my home, but my father owns it for his business. He uses the computer in his office, so I cannot use it freely. Also, I always use the computer in my university. KGU campus has a lot of computers. There are in the library, e-campus center, and LL class. I usually use the Internet in the library, because it is quiet and calm. It is easy to study and do my homework there for me.
According to the latest what I said, I didn't do just 12 book reviews because of having no time. However, I like reading books so much. My favorite book in English garden was 'The Little Mermaid.' I think it is fun for the students who likes to read books to do book reviews.
Also, I think it is important to start their own homework early and do them completely. If we postpone and start slowly, we must be busy so much! So I recommend starting early and taking the class if you want to feel so good taking Writing Ⅲ. Of course I will start my homework and use my time better.

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Thanks for Mr. B,!

I could learn a lot of things with Writing Class. Mr. B, is very kind teacher, and he taught me grammar, how to use a computer, what to write on my blog, and so on. I have done typing, book review, and essays as my homework. They were not easy, so it was difficult for me to think and write it. Though it was hard, I could become better at them. I appreciate Mr. B, very much!
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