Wednesday, June 5, 2013

working copy of 1-02b


The university students have examinations at each class, lecture, and semester. They take different classes every day, so they should take many examinations. It is very hard to study for a lot of time before the season. It asks their academic ability to them, so they challenge and do their best. In addition, students in English department must take TOEIC and TOEFL. They are important for people who study and speak English, want to go abroad, and talk with people around the world. Students want to study hard each year, and try to everything they must do and want to do. Maybe every student in English department has ever heard that the second grade is very hard from friends. They are full of having my homework, reports, and study for exam. Honestly, they become so tired because of them. Sometimes they don’t want to do anything, but decided to do my best if they think they were beneficial to me in the future.. they think they will be a human who can do everything easily after that.

Classes are important for students to study and stay as a student. Every day they have different classes. Sometimes they were made to take hand in reports by teachers of each class. If they don’t do that, their evaluation will be bad a little bit. Also, they take them with their classmates. All the students are divided into some groups, and they try to do something hard, spend a university life and another holiday with their friends. Classmates, what is called friends are important, and maybe will be an irreplaceable existence.
Maybe almost of the students belong to club in university. The clubs of Kumamoto Gakuen University are mainly classified into five, each of them are Student council, Gymnastics committee, Cultural committee, Circle union, Gakusyo society. Almost of them do their activities on Wednesday every week. For example, they are sports, home party, eating out, and so on.  A reception for new students and a new student welcome picnic are held in a spring term, and Takumasai, a parade in the city, reelection and an officer party  are held in an autumn term.  Students are enjoying each event  for every season. Also, friends are very kind to everyone, so students will be happy to belong to their club and know friends.
If it passes with friends every day, naturally friendship will be made. Friends who spend every time and everyday can be called best friends. Others are important existences even if there are different. That’s why students should help each other. Class members and club members are important, too. Spending alone for a lot of time is wasteful. Life is concerning with another people, so students should not be alone and make friendships.

Lunch time is very important time for students.  Everyday students go to school. And almost student is very tired.  Everyone attends a lecture. And everyone has a lot of  homework.  2nd  year’s student has a lot of homework. So lunch time is relax time for them. K.G.U has a students’ dining hall. here is very big dining hall. They always relax and eat lunch here. Other student bring a lunch box. Their parent made foe them every morning. Little people make for themselves every morning. They eat that with friends. And they enjoy lunch time.

Students does many things at after school. Alot of students go to the part time jobs after school.They needs a lot of money. So part time job is very important for them to earn money. But part time job is very busy foe them. They have a lot of homework and a lot of things they have to do. Thy have no time. But they have to go part time job to earn maoney for school.
Almost  students join to clubs. Not only sports club. K.G.U has a lot of clubs. They enjoy their own club activities. Clubs to do a lot of kind club activity. They enjoy that. And they are able to make many friends. All student has alot of homework. They has to do that. Homework is take a lot of time. So student has to do very hard.

Student is coming to the school by various means. By bike, bus and other traffic vehicle. And they take a lot of time. One of people come to school alone. But other people come to school with friends. That time is poor for alone people. But other people enjoy this time. Talk with anything and eat something with friends. It is relax time for them too.  

Students have many different kinds of goals. For example someone who want to be a teacher. Everyone has goals. Near-term goals is about study. For example TOEIC and TOEFL are one of near-term goals. TOEIC and TOEFL score is very important for them. Students have many kind of mid-term goals too. They have something to finish while college student. And they study hard for that. So long-term goals is very important. Reason why students come to school is anything. But every students have a dream. Every student wants to dream come true.


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8 comments:

  1. Your essay was clear and easy to read :)
    I get to school by bus.
    How do you get to school?

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    1. I go to this university by the car, but sometimes train.

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  2. Your essay is easy to understand.
    However I recommend that you use "first, second, ..." .
    What is your goal? Please tell me.

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    1. Thanks your comment!
      I will try use those words.

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  3. Do you enjoy your clube??
    Today is Wednesday!!
    What are you going to do your clube?

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  4. Hello Saki.
    Your essay find about KGU.

    What is your goal?

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  5. This essay is good! This essay has some extra spaces, so you had better get rid of them.
    What circle or club do you belong to?

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  6. This essay is good to read it easily. I go to a part-time job after school. What do you do after school?

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