Corrected Essay 6

Today, I would like to introduce my favorite TV drama. It is “Prison Break.” This is
made in the U.S., and broadcast by television all over the world. This is a suspense story,
but it makes people excited. The leading part is played by Wentworth Miller.


I want to tell you about the main character performed by him. His name is Michael
Scofield, and he works as a qualified architect who is highly intelligent. Michael has
the courage to do everything.

Next, I will introduce the story in detail. It is set in a prison. Michael’s brother,
Lincoln, was arrested because of of being found guilty of shoting the brother of the
Vice President, so he was committed to prison. Lincoln received an sentence of the
death penalty after a month, and Michael decided to help him and wanted him to
escape from there. Michael’s friend took part in the reconstruction of prison which
took in his older brother. To learn the plan of the whole prison, Michael tattooed the
blueprints of the prison on his body. When all the other plans are set, Michael
robbed a bank, and he was caught by the police for the purpose of being committed
to the same prison that his brother is in. A lawyer, Veronica, who is the lover of the
older brother is going to defend Michael, but Michael refused and urged at the trial
to be committed to the same prison with his brother without a stay of execution.
After the confinement, he immediately becomes friends with Fernando who is
imprisoned in the same room with him, and received an explanation of the various
people of consequence in the prison. However, Michael researched the persons who
are necessary for his plan of a jailbreak before he was imprisoned. At first, Michael
approaches Abruzzi who is absolutely necessary for a jailbreak. He is like a boss in
the prison, and he was a mafia member before his confinement. Michael knows that
he is so dangerous, but he approaches for as a step of the jailbreak.

I knew this drama when I was a high school student. I like watching DVDs from
way back, but I had never known about “Prison Break.” After watching this, I
became a fan immediately. Of course the story is so exciting, and the main character,
Michael Scofield is a dauntless man. I think the main points are how the plan is
made and how Michael tries to break out of prison, and human relations in the prison. I strongly recommend this drama to everyone.

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